Sue is finally getting to its theme

Filed: Blog @ 7:29am on July 25, 2014 No comments yet! :(   Word Count: 290

Last time we had a Sue chapter, last week with Chapter 12, we had Annie try to seduce our narrator into sleeping with her.

This was supposed to actually be chapter 6, so what happened?

The first 4 chapters followed the plan almost exactly, but chapter 5 to 11 were actually supposed to only be chapter 5.

The plan was to have a single chapter for the party, which was completely unrealistic.

As I was writing Chapter 5 back in 2011 and trying to get the party going, I realized that it was way to quick.

As such, Chapter 5 was only the planning of the party, with Chapter 6 being the preparations, with a little sexy time in Chapter 7 (the Shower).

That meant that Chapter 8 would be the party itself, but I got lost in pouring some words of wisdom (I hope you appreciated them).

The party was thus postponed to chapter 9, which just became the presentation of Sue’s friends.

As such, the part was chapter 10, for the supper, and 11, for the after supper part of the party.

Interestingly, the plan was for Nicole to dump her boyfriend at the party and to have her wait for the narrator in his bed, but Annie seemed to beg for the role, leaving Nicole stuck with her boyfriend.

The worst, is that even thought I wrote Chapter 12 knowing full well it was Annie, I slipped a few Nicole in the text in the first draft since my notes were all about Nicole…

This has been fixed since.

And so, next Monday, you’ll get to see what Sue is about, and I can’t wait to build that story: after all, this chapter was supposed to have been published on March 22nd 2012 if I had followed the plan…

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